IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 7.5

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7.5

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11 Apr 25, 09:14

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The response accurately describes the data, but could improve coherence by better organizing comparisons between the two states. Vocabulary is appropriate, though more variety could enhance the description. Grammar is mostly accurate with a good range of structures.

Overall score	7.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	8.0
Lexical resource	7.0
Coherence & cohesion	7.0
Task response	7.0

Writing Task

#Water Usage

#Pie Chart

Compare the water usage in different sectors in California and New York in 2022.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Make comparisons where relevant.

Highlight any significant differences or similarities.

New York

California

Submitted Answer

Words177|Paragraphs5

English:

Global Issues:

Readability

Coherence

Cohesion

Vocabulary Usage

Grammar Range

Logical Flow

The pie charts illustrate water consumption across various sectors in California and New York in 2022.

Overall, domestic usage was the largest consumer of water when both states were combined, accounting for 35% of total consumption.

In California, the agriculture sector had the

highest

water consumption at approximately 40%. However, in New York, agriculture was the third-largest sector, using only 20% of the total water supply, which is half of California's usage. Despite this, domestic usage ranked second in California, making up 30% of total water consumption, whereas it was the

highest

in New York, with a 40% share.

Additionally, in California, the water consumption in the industrial sector was 1.5 times

higher

than in public services.

In New York, domestic usage was the top sector, accounting for 40% of water consumption. Other sectors, including agriculture, industry, public services, and others, accounted for 20%, 25%, 10%, and 5%, respectively. Furthermore, two sectors in New York had

higher

water consumption compared to California, while the remaining sectors either remained the same or showed a decline.

IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 7.5

Writing Task

New York

California

Submitted Answer

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Total Errors	7
Grammatical range and accuracy	1
Lexical resource	2
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	1