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The response accurately describes the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Coherence and cohesion are maintained, but the vocabulary could be more varied to enhance clarity and precision.

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Writing Task

#Water Usage

#Pie Chart

Compare the water usage in different sectors in California and New York in 2022.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Make comparisons where relevant.

Highlight any significant differences or similarities.

New York

California

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The pie charts illustrate the water consumption in various sectors in California and New York in 2022.

Overall, there is difference in the highest sector of water usage between both states

but

there is

simiarlity

in the lowest sector of the water consumption.

The percentage of the highest water usage in both of states is the

same

which is 40 percent of the total water consumption. In California is the most water usage is the agriculture

sector

but the

doemstic

sector is the highest in New York.

The second water consumption sector in California is the domestic sector with 30 percent and in New york, it is the agriculture sector with 20 percent. The industrial sector is the third water usage sector in both

states

which is 15 percent in California and 25 percent in New York. The public services sector and other sector have the same percentage in both

states

which are 10 percent and 5 percent respectively.