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IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 6.5 (Academic Training)

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28 Mar 25, 02:27
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The response effectively describes the data, accurately reflecting the proportions of tourists in both countries. However, minor grammatical errors and limited lexical variety slightly detract from the overall quality. Improved coherence and cohesion would enhance clarity.
Overall score6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors17
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource8
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1

Writing Task

#Tourism
#Pie Chart
The pie charts depict the proportion of international tourists visiting different cities in Australia and Canada in 2021.
Describe the overall distribution of tourists in each country.
Compare the data for Australia and Canada.
Identify any notable trends or patterns.

Canada

Australia

Submitted Answer

Words185|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
The pie charts illustrate the distribution of international tourists who were visiting five different regions in Australia (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Perth and Adelaide) and Canada (Toronto, Vancouver, Montreal,Calgary and Ottawa) in 2021.
Overall, Sydney had the
highest
proportion of
tourist
visiting the place, compared to the
other
regions in Australia. While in Canada, Toronto had the
highest
number of visitors compared to
other
regions. On the
other
hand, the least tourist visiting
region
was
Adelaide and Ottawa in Australia and Canada respectively.
Sydney had the
highest
tourists
propotion
(40.0%), followed by Melbourne (30.0%) and Brisbane (15.0%). On the
other
hand, Perth and Adelaide had the lowest
propotion
of
tourists
which were 10.0 percent and 5.0 percent respectively.
In Canada, the
highest
tourists proportion was Toronto (35.0%) followed by Vacouver which was one
quater
of the pie chart (25.0%). Meanwhile, Montreal was the third
highest
, which was 5 percent different
than
Vancouver (20.0%). On the
other
hand, Calgary and Ottawa had the same
propotion
(10.0%) and they were the least tourists proportion compared to
other
regions.

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