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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in some areas. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect readability, while the analysis could be more detailed and structured.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 22 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Canada
United States
Analyze the pie charts showing the distribution of income levels in the United States and Canada for the year 2022.
Describe the proportion of income levels in both countries.
Compare and contrast the income distributions between the United States and Canada.
Identify any significant differences or similarities in the income levels between the two countries.
#Income Levels
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
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The pie charts illustrate five different income levels distribution in percentage for two countries (The United States and Canada) in 2022.
Overall, the highest level income percentage for both of countries in
middle
income
which is 35% for Canada higer
than United States
in
30%. Similarly
for the least income level in that year is high income either for United states
or Canada.Middle
income level leading for both countries especially
in Canada
follows by lower
middle
income and upper middle
income at exact similar 20% in Canada. United states
second largest
income level distribution is lower
middle
income which is 25%, in contrast with Canada, low
income
level follows just below 5% than lower
middle
income.In addition, the two least distribution level for both countries are upper
middle
income at 15% in United States
and High Income which only 10% from 100% total. Whereas for Canada is low
income in 15% and similarly high income
level is 10%.