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The response effectively describes the data from the pie charts, maintaining a formal tone and clear structure. Minor improvements could be made in vocabulary variety and the use of more complex grammatical structures to enhance the overall quality.
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Grammatical range and accuracy8.0
Lexical resource8.0
Coherence & cohesion8.0
Task response8.0
Total Errors7
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Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion2
Task response1

Writing Task

#Agriculture
#Pie Chart
The pie charts illustrate the percentage distribution of agricultural exports from five countries (Canada, Mexico, Argentina, South Africa, and New Zealand) in 2021.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Identify any notable trends or irregularities.

Canada

Argentina

Submitted Answer

Words176|Paragraphs5
English:UK English
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The pie charts
give
information about the percentage of agricultural exports in Canada and Argentina in the year 2021.
Overall, both countries export the same five types of agricultural products, but the percentage of each category is different. In Canada, wheat is the most exported product, while in Argentina, corn has the highest proportion.
In Canada, wheat makes up 30% of total exports, which is the biggest share, follow by corn at 25%. Soybeans
is
also a significant part, accounting for 20%. Fruits and vegetables contribute the smallest portion, with 15% and 10% respectively.
On the other hand, Argentina exports mostly corn, which represent 30% of the total. Both wheat and soybeans have an equal share at 25% each. Fruits and vegetables have the lowest percentage, each accounting for 10%.
Comparing both countries, wheat is more dominant in Canada while corn is the major product in Argentina. The percentage of soybeans export is same in Argentina and Canada. Fruits export is slightly higher in Canada than Argentina, while the proportion of vegetables is equal in both.

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