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The response provides a basic interpretation of the pie charts but lacks clarity and precision in data description. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Transportation
#Pie Chart
Interpret the pie charts showing the distribution of transportation modes in Sydney and Berlin in 2020.
Highlight the key modes of transportation in both cities.
Discuss the similarities and differences in transportation choices between Sydney and Berlin.
Analyze any notable trends or deviations in the data.
Berlin
Sydney
Submitted Answer
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The pie charts
depicts
information about the five types of transportation modes used in Sydney and Berlin in 2020.After analyzing the pie charts, it can be seen clearly that maximum numbers of people use Trains as their transport in
sydney
and berlin
, However
walking is done by minimum people.In Sydney, Train and Car
has
the highest
proportion
both are same at 30%. Bus
are the second highest
at 25%. In contrary
less number of people uses Bicycle as their transport at only 10%. While remaining
5% is done by walking.In Berlin, Trains has the
highest
and cars has
second
highest
proportion, making up 35% and 25% as transportation repectively
. While the proportion of Buses are
20%. However
15% of transportation done with the help of buses. The walking has only 5%.