IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5

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The response provides a basic comparison of education levels in Japan and South Korea, but lacks clarity and coherence. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall quality of the answer.
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Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors10
Grammatical range and accuracy2
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Education Levels
#Pie Chart
The pie charts illustrate the education levels among adults in Japan and South Korea in 2020. Provide a detailed comparison of the data.
Compare the distribution of education levels between Japan and South Korea.
Identify any significant trends or patterns in the data.
Discuss any notable differences or similarities between the two countries.

Japan

South Korea

Submitted Answer

Words131|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
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The pie charts
compre
the the
education levels among adults in Japan and South Korea in 2020.
Overall, according to the 2 countries the highest number of education level has bachelor's degree; respectively, Japan - 35% and South Korea - 40%.
To begin with, the similar number of education level reached the high school diploma in Japan and Master's degree in South Korea as 30% of level. In contrast to that, the average amount of academic level has Mater's degree in Japan as 25% and high school diploma in South Korea as 20%.
On the other hand, there is a 9% of academic level has in reached the doctorate about two countries. As well as, the lowest number of education level has no formal education respectively 1% in both countries.

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