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IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Writing Academic Report Sample Band 5.5 (Academic Training)

5.5
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16 Mar 25, 01:10
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The response provides a general comparison of water usage in California and New York, but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains grammatical inaccuracies. Improved coherence and a more varied vocabulary would enhance the overall quality of the answer.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors12
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource1
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Water Usage
#Pie Chart
Compare the water usage in different sectors in California and New York in 2022.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Highlight any significant differences or similarities.

New York

California

Submitted Answer

Words150|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
The pie charts compare the percentage of consumed water by five different categories in both
cities
California
and New york .
Overall, it can be clearly seen that both agriculture and internal use are accounted for the highest proportions in these states, while the other three categories do not reach half of the shares of water usage.
In California, agriculture consumes just under 50% of the water, followed by domestic usage, at 30%, which is double the percentage of industries. The figures for public services and
category
labelled 'others' are similar to
that
for industrial consumption.
Regarding New York City, although the shares of agriculture
are
lower than that in California by 20%, but local usage's ratio is higher by 10%. Moreover, factories in New York consume more water compared to that in California by 10%. The figures for Public services and other usages are similar to those in California.

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