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The response provides a general overview of water usage in India and China, but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more accurate data representation would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
China
India
Describe the water usage patterns in different sectors in India and China in 2020.
Identify the key features in each pie chart.
Compare the water usage between the two countries.
Highlight any notable trends or differences.
#Water Usage
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:155
Paragraphs:3
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The pie charts
breakdown
the proportion of water usage between India and China. Overall, both countries spend the most volume of water on agriculture, while the other
categories were far less than those two.As seen on the charts, India and China illustrate similarities in the proportion of sectors flowed by the water. It is evident that agriculture dominates the water usage
the
two countries, by 50% and 60% respectively, ranking this
sectors at the first place among the other
four categories. These are a massive usage
dominating more than half of the chart.On the
other
hand, either countries
spend much less on the industrial, public services, and other
sectors. They spend the least for
public services other
sectors at the same at 7% and 3% respectively. Beside
this, domestic and industrial sectors follow agriculture as the sectors that obtain most of the water, ranging between one-tenth and one-fifth of both countries.