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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends and differences. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
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Question
2010
2020
The pie charts illustrate the contribution of different greenhouse gases to the total emissions from five regions in 2010 and 2020.
Analyze the changes in the proportion of each greenhouse gas over the decade.
Determine which region had the highest and lowest total emissions in both years.
Discuss the possible reasons for these changes.
#Climate Change
#Pie Chart
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The pie charts below show the contribution of various greenhouse gases to the total emissions by five regions among 10 years (2010-2020)
Totally, the CO2 emission
gase
was the highest from 2010 to 2020. As well as, Methane was the second popular, while the same gases in percentage terms, which are Fluorinated Gases and Others, remained constant in ten years.CO2 was more than half (60%) in 2010. The 20 percent of the first pie chart was occupied by Methane emission
gase
. Although CO2 experienced a downward tendency by 10% in 2020, the top, which is prominent, of the first pie chart was not occupied by Methane. It was increased also with ten percent difference. However, percentages
difference between CO2 and Methane was changed from 40 to 20.In 2010, the three gases, which are Nitrous Oxide, Fluorinated Gases and Other, had 10%, 5% and also 5%. Additionally, the three gases
leveled
off over the period of ten years. Namely, the difference between the percentage of those three gases equal to zero.To sum up, Only CO2, which has established the dominance among other gases
since
ten years, and Methane, which changed its percentage over the period of 10 years, changed their previous condition.