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The response provides a general overview of water usage distribution but lacks clarity and precision in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect coherence, while vocabulary is adequate but not varied.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Water Usage
#Pie Chart
Analyze the water usage distribution by households in different regions of the United States and Canada.
Compare the household water usage proportions in each region.
Identify which region has the highest and lowest household water usage.
Discuss any significant trends or irregularities.
Canada
United States
Submitted Answer
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The pie charts below
demonstrates
the distribution of water consumption by households in various areas in the United States and Canada. All figures are measured in percentage.Overall, it is clear to evidence that Canada have a big proportion of water usage in Central region, while the United States have the lowest percentage in Alaska. In the
United States
most of the regions have a big percentage in distribution water.The two areas - Midwest and West
in United States
and the West Coast and Prairies in Canada have the same proportion with 20%. The lowest indicators in the United States shows in Alaska with 5%, and Northern
Territories region in Canada more by 5%.The Central region of Canada distribute more water usage by households at 35%, while in the South region of the United States distribute a little less by 5%. Followed by
South
region there are Northeast consumption 25
% of water by households, that bigger by 10% than Atlantic
area in Canada.