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The response provides a clear comparison of energy consumption in the USA and Canada, accurately reflecting the data. However, the analysis could be more detailed, and the vocabulary could be more varied to enhance clarity and engagement.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
USA
Canada
Examine the energy consumption breakdown in the USA and Canada and interpret the data.
Explain the percentage share of each energy source in both countries.
Identify and discuss any major differences in energy consumption between the USA and Canada.
Comment on any notable trends or patterns in the data.
#Energy Consumption
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
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The pie charts above show the resources used to meet the energy consumption of the United States and Canada. All resources are broken down into 5 main categories: coal, natural gas, nuclear,
renewable
and oil. The first chart shows data for the USA, while the lateral chart schematizes data for Canada.Overall, it can be seen that the ranking of preferred sources is mostly the same for both countries. Energy produced using nuclear power and coal differs for each country. Coal is second in the US with 20%, while nuclear is more preferred in Canada. The majority of energy consumption
relys on
non-renewable
sources. While the United States produces a quarter of its energy from renewable
sources, this rate rises to around 30 per cent in Canada. However, renewable
energy options are not the least common, but rather oil, which has a share of 10% in both states.In conclusion, despite some
differences
both countries show numerous similarities in energy consumption preferences.