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Question
Canada
Germany
The pie charts depict the percentage of different communication tools used by businesses in Germany and Canada in 2022.
Analyze the use of communication tools in businesses in Germany and Canada.
Identify any significant differences or similarities in the data.
Discuss the potential impact of these trends on business operations.
#Technology Adoption
#Pie Chart
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The pie chart shows
ratio
of communication tools utilised
in germany
and canada
by businesses in 2022.Email was the most common source of
communication
while social media was least
utilised
in both countries. On the other hand, instant messaging tool was used
by 15% businesses
in both countries.The data showed that emails and phones remained the most used telecommunication sources. Germany remained ahead of
canada
in terms of utilisation
of both sources by 5%. The trend of video conferencing was seen more in canada
percenting
at 25% while in germany
this percentage was 20%.Social media was the least
used
tool in both the countries. Canada used
this tool more than germany
. Instant messages showed similar
trend in both countries at 15%. Maybe, because of the ease associated with messaging. Emails although most used
by both the cuntries
, are a hassel
. They are hard
to write and need to be checked daily. I think it slows the procedures of companies. On the other hand
text messages are delivered quickly and
we can reply back to them instantly.