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The response provides a basic comparison of energy consumption in China and India, but lacks clarity and precision in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range affect coherence and task achievement.

Overall score	6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	6.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Energy Consumption

#Pie Chart

Discuss the energy consumption statistics for China and India and provide an analysis of the data.

Detail the percentage distribution of each energy source in both countries.

Compare the energy consumption patterns between China and India.

Identify any significant trends or deviations in the data.

China

India

Submitted Answer

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The pie chart illustrates the type of power usage statistics for China and India, and the data for analysis is provided in percentages. Overall, coal serves the greatest figures for both nations, with renewable energy as the second most significant resources, and oil as the third largest. Non-renewable gas like natural ones, along with nuclear, has a much smaller number.

First, the most substantial power consumption in China is coal serves half of the total power expenditure. Following along,

replenisable

resources accounting for 20% and

wIth

only 5% lower,

accomodate

oil for 15%. Additionally, natural gasses cater 5% decrease for about 10%. Lastly, nuclear energy as the least power

catagory

to use, only around 5% of usage.

Meanwhile, India shares only a few differences in numbers with the

chinese

, providing coal as the first biggest expenditure at around 40%. Complying with

suistanable

energy as its second preeminent consumption.

Moreever

, less than 5% of the previous figure, place oil along with non-renewable gas in 15%. At last, nuclear power

accomodate

at the

bottommost

of all energy usage, with only 5%, sharing the same number

ones in China.

IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6

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China

India

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Total Errors	17
Grammatical range and accuracy	3
Lexical resource	9
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	2