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The response provides a basic comparison of cultural participation in Los Angeles and Toronto, but it lacks grammatical accuracy and coherence. The vocabulary is limited and there are several spelling and punctuation errors, which affect clarity and formality.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors23
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource9
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Cultural Participation
#Pie Chart
Analyze the cultural participation in various activities in Los Angeles and Toronto in 2018.
Summarize the participation rates for each activity in both cities.
Identify the activity with the highest participation in Los Angeles and Toronto.
Discuss any notable trends or patterns in the cultural participation data for both cities.

Toronto

Los Angeles

Submitted Answer

Words107|Paragraphs6
English:UK English
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The pie chart illustrates the cultural participation in five activities in
toronto
and LA during the year 2018.
In
Toronto
the
majoraty
of people
was
attracted to the museums with a 30%, then
concers
follows with a 25%,
Theaters
had 20%.
In Los
Angeles
Museums had 10% less
partisipations
when compared to Toronto.
as concerts in LA was had the
highiest
percentage with a 30%.Theatre was higher than Toronto as well, as it Rose up to 25%.
as for Art Exhibitions
and and
Dance
preformnces
both cities
where
the same .
Toronto had a 15%for the Exhibitions , same as LA and Dance
preformance
was the least

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