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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and clarity. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary reduce the overall effectiveness of the description.
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Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response4.0
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Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Technology Adoption
#Pie Chart
The pie charts depict the percentage of different communication tools used by businesses in Germany and Canada in 2022.
Analyze the use of communication tools in businesses in Germany and Canada.
Identify any significant differences or similarities in the data.
Discuss the potential impact of these trends on business operations.

Canada

Germany

Submitted Answer

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The pie chart
gove
information about the percentage of two countries
using
various
platform
in order to communicate that are
used
by businesses in 2022. The countries are mentioned are Germany and Canada. Tool often being
used
are email, phone, video conferencing, instant messaging, and social media.
In
general
the most common tools that they
use
are email and
phone
. The percentage of these two tools in
each countries
have
almost the same results. In
Germany
there are 35% of business
using
email, meanwhile in Canada it reached 30%, and it shows only 5% differences.
However, video conferencing and instant messaging are popular to in those countries. The number are hit the same in each media.
Morever
,
apperantley
social media is uncommon thing in Germany and Canada for business. They prefer to
use
something that more formal than social media such as email, phone, video calls, and instant messaging.
In addition, those 4 tools
has
the potential impact of these trends on business operation.

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