IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 7
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The response accurately describes the housing demand data for Toronto and Vancouver, with clear comparisons. However, minor grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range slightly affect the overall quality. Improved coherence and a wider range of vocabulary would enhance the response.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Housing
#Pie Chart
The pie charts below illustrate the housing demand in Toronto and Vancouver in 2023.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Toronto
Vancouver
Submitted Answer
Words100|Paragraphs4
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The pie chart
gives
information about housing demand in two cities ( Toronto and Vancouver) in 2023, measured in percentage.Overall, it can be seen that
apartment
demand was significantly higher in both cities.In Toronto, the housing demand was 40 %. However, it was 5% greater in Vancouver. On the other hand, the
propotion
of detached houses in Toronto was 25%, and it was 5% less in Vancouver, accompanied by 20%.The percentage of semi-detached houses and terraced houses in both cities was the same, that was 15% and 10% respectively. Likewise, other housing demand was also 1 in 10.