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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and clarity in some areas. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect readability, while the vocabulary is adequate but not varied.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
2021
2022
The pie charts below show the distribution of agricultural land use in five different regions in 2021 and 2022.
Compare the proportions of land use for each region between the two years.
Identify any significant changes or trends.
Discuss possible reasons for these changes.
#Agriculture
#Pie Chart
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The picture provides the comparison of the five
regions
distribution of farming land use including Asia, North America, Africa, Europe, and South America between two years, in 2021 and 2022.Overall, the pie charts were not significantly changed. However, North America and Asia
shows
related transformation, the usage of agricultural land in Asia has increased whereas it has decreased in North America.Asia has the most percentage of farming land throughout two years and as the only region that rose, it has reached 35 per cent of allocation after grew five per cent from 2021. Meanwhile, North America and Europe was fallen, started with a quarter for North America and 18 per cent for Europe, at the last the distribution was declined to 22 and 18 per cent, respectively.
Other than that, Africa and South America has not changed in two period, 15% for Africa and 10% for South America. These two nations
has
the lowest percentage of farming land use.