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The response provides a clear overview of the data with accurate grammar and a good range of vocabulary. However, it could improve by offering more detailed comparisons and highlighting specific trends for each state to enhance task achievement and coherence.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 8 | |
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Writing Task
#Sports and Recreation
#Line Chart
Analyze the line chart representing the number of participants in outdoor recreational activities in four US states from 2010 to 2020.
Summarize the participation trends for each state.
Identify any periods of rapid increase or decrease.
Compare the trends and provide insights.
Submitted Answer
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The line graph shows the number of joiners in the different outdoor recreational activities in California, Texas, Florida and New York, respectively. The data gathered is between 2010 and 2020.
Overall, the four states had a stable increasing trend from the start of the study until 2020. It is seen that the state of California had the most number of players during the 10-year study, while the least is New york.
In detail, California initially had a total of 400 players in 2010 and almost doubled after a decade. In comparison, New York had a lesser number of individuals who participated in outdoor recreational
activies
at 150 in the same initial year, nonetheless, this figure doubled by 2020. It is also observed that during the 10-year study, there was not a decline or fluctuations in the figures rather it was a stable rise of participants who registered for the activities.