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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some descriptions. The vocabulary is limited, and the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and linking of ideas.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
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| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
The line chart illustrates the average house prices in four major cities: New York, London, Tokyo, and Sydney from 2010 to 2020 (in thousands of USD).
Summarize the main trends for each city over the given period.
Identify any significant fluctuations or changes in the house prices.
Compare the trends between the four cities.
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Submitted Answer
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The line graph shows the average costs of houses in New York, London, Tokyo, and Sydney over
a
11-year period. Units are measured in thousands of USD.Overall, the prices of houses in New York were the highest in the period given, while Tokyo was the lowest. All the cities had a
significantly increase
in the amount of money during the given years.The average house prices in New York started at 500 USD in 2010 and increased until
reached
just over 500 USD in 2015 before it is remaining dramatically growth to reached
approximately 670 USD in 2020. In 2010
the average cost in Tokyo was 300 USD and had a steady rise continuing to get just over 350 USD in 2020.On the other hand,
in the beginning of
the period
house prices in London increased and reached
below 500 USD in 2013 to climb significantly until reaching
almost under 600 in 2020. Likewise, Sydney had dramatic
rise over the following 11 years.