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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The description of trends is not entirely accurate, and the vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
The line chart illustrates the average house prices in four major cities: New York, London, Tokyo, and Sydney from 2010 to 2020 (in thousands of USD).
Summarize the main trends for each city over the given period.
Identify any significant fluctuations or changes in the house prices.
Compare the trends between the four cities.
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Submitted Answer
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The line graph shows the average costs of houses in New York, London, Tokyo, and Sydney over
a
11-year period. Units are measured in thousands of USD.Overall, the prices of
house
in New York was
the highest in the period given, while Tokyo was the lowest. All the cities had a significantlly
incerase
in the amount of money during the given years.The average of house prices in New York started at 500 USD in 2010 and was increasing until reached just over 500 USD in 2015 before it remaining dramatically growth to reached
approximatelly
670 USD in 2020. In 2010
the average costs
in Tokyo was 300 USD and had steady rise and contiouing
to get just over 350 USD in 2020.On the other hand, in the
beginig
of the period house prices in London increased and get bellow
500 USD in 2013 to climbing signficantlly
until reached almost under 600 in 2020. likewise
Sydney, had dramaically
rose over the following 11 years.