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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The description of trends is not entirely accurate, and the vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive.

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#Environmental Issues

#Line Chart

The line chart illustrates the levels of air pollution (measured in micrograms per cubic meter) in four major cities between 2000 and 2020.

Describe the changes in air pollution levels over the years.

Compare the trends among the four cities.

Highlight any periods of significant improvement or deterioration.

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The line graph provides information on the percentage of air pollution in four cities, namely, New york, Biejing, Delhi,

london

. The data measured in micrograms per cubic meter from the year 2000 - to 2020.

Overall, The leading in the percentage is Beijing, followed by, Delhi and third is New york, and the fourth in the provided data is

london

To begin with, In the year 2000, Beijing, had the highest based on cubic meter which 70, and next is Delhi, which is 60, and the third is New york which is 50 and the third in the provided data and the last in the given line graph is Londoin.

It can be seen that Beijing is the leading in per cubic meter on the year 2000.

In 2005, a different pattern can be observed as Beijing increased in 5 and rose to 89 in 2010, and continuously declining until 2020. Whereas, Delhi, Showed static and almost the same value from the year 2005 to but rose gradually until 2020. On the other hand, New york, Showed a decreasing pattern from 2005 until 2020. While, London, showed a static or almost the value from 2005 to 2020.

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