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The response provides a basic overview of the crime rates but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in data interpretation. Improved coherence and more accurate data representation would enhance the overall quality.
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| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
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| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
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| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
The line chart displays the crime rates in four different cities over a period of six years.
Summarize the overall trends in crime rates for each city.
Identify any significant fluctuations or changes.
Compare the crime rates among the four cities.
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Submitted Answer
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The line graph illustrates the crime rate in the New York, Los Angeles, Chicago and Houston
form
2010 to 2015Overall, crime rates of the Chicago,Los Angeles and Houston showed a steady rise.However, New York showed a
siginificant
rise over the periodIn 2010 the crime rate of the New York and Houston were 500 % and 300% respectively. New York rate increased sharply throughout the period
untiell
in get to nearly 620% at the end of the period. In the mean time
, the percentage of the crime in the Chicago grew up almost 20% in 2011 and then drowp
down 10% in 2012. After that
it experienced up word trend until the end of the period.Los Angeles, which had a rate of approximately 450 in 2010, also showed a gradual upward trend, reaching over 500 by the end of the period.Houston, meanwhile, began with a crime rate of around 400 and remained nearly constant throughout the years and reaching over 500 by the end of the period