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The response provides a basic overview of the trends in travel times but contains several grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, and the analysis could be more detailed and accurate in describing the data trends.
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| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
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Writing Task
#Transportation
#Line Chart
Analyze the trends in the average travel time by public transport in London from 2005 to 2015.
Describe the overall trend in travel times.
Compare the changes across different types of public transport.
Highlight any periods of significant change.
Submitted Answer
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The line graph illustrates the
average
travel time required for public transports
like bus, tube, train, and tram in London from 2005 to 2015.Overall, train
shows
a downerd
trend over the period, similarly bus transport show
some fluations
in butween
. Tube and tram shows
a slightly upward trend in time consuming
, but relatively lower as compared to other mode of transports.To begin with, train was the highest
time consuming
to travel in london
about 50 minutes in 2005, it's
started declining over the period steadily and reach 40 minutes on average
by 2015. However
bus transpotation
shows
soem
flutuactions
, in 2005 it was 40 minute
on average
and climbed slightely
to approximatly
42 minutes by 2007 and declined by the following years by reaching below 35 minutes in 2015.On the other hand, tube transport
show
an increase in time taken to travel, starting in 2005 it was 30 minutes on average
and by the end of the period it
roses to 35 minutes on average
. Similarely
, tram transport also
shows
an increased in travel time, it was the lowest in 2005 about 20
minuts
on
average
and
it increased to 25 minutes by 2015, still make tram transport is the lowest time consume to travel in London.