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The response provides a general overview of the data but contains inaccuracies in data interpretation and lacks detailed analysis. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate but could benefit from more variety and precision.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
The line chart illustrates the annual carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions levels from 2000 to 2020 in four regions: North America, Europe, Asia, and Africa.
Describe the overall trends in CO2 emissions for each region.
Compare the emission levels among the regions.
Highlight any significant changes or fluctuations in the CO2 emissions data.
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The line graph depicts the yearly glass house emissions level between 2000 and 2020 in four different nations, particularly North America, Europe, Asia and Africa. Overall, the data indicated that Asia had the highest rate of carbon dioxide (CO2)
emission
whereas Africa had the lowest
among the four countries. Meanwhile, there was slight increase on the emission level for Africa and the proportion for Asia rose significantly over the two decades. Conversely, the numbers for North America and Europe maintained their positions across the first 10 years period and decreased within the subsequent 10 years.To begin with, Asia had the highest rate of CO2 due to serious traffic congestions and mass productions in most of the Asian regions, started at the rate of 6,000 in 2000
and
it rose gradually over the years up to 9,000 in 2020.
However, Africa had the lowest
level of emission compared to the other three countries
where initially it was capped at 1,000 and
it then slowly increased to about 1,200 in 2020, thereby remaining at its lowest
position.On the other hand, the glass house effect in North America and Europe
were
not too serious in comparison with Asia
mainly because the
strong implementation of environmental laws and policies by the governments. The proportion of CO2 in North America was at 5,000 in 2000 and the numbers increased moderately to approximately 5,100 in 2010 before it dropped to 5,000 again in 2020. Additionally, Europe was lower
than North America at 4,000 in 2000 and thereafter the rates fell in 2005 all the way to about 3,400 in 2020.