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The response provides a general overview of the trends in electric vehicle usage but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The data interpretation is partially inaccurate, and the vocabulary is limited, affecting the overall coherence and task achievement.
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| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 26 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Examine the shifts in the percentage of people using electric vehicles in various European countries from 2012 to 2022.
Summarize the main trends for each country.
Compare the growth rates among the countries.
Identify any significant increases or decreases in usage.
#Transportation
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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The line graph demonstrates the people percentage
utilizing
electric
vehicles in numerous European countries (Germany, France, Norway, and Netherlands) between 2012 and 2022.Overall, the trends reveal significantly
increase of
the people percentage using
elctric
vehicle
in both of European Countries. At the beginning of the periods of year, Germany became the lowest percentage of people utilizing
electric
vehicles
while Norway became the most. At the end of the period of trends, Germany shows the highest percentage, besides France remain the lowest percentage of people using
electric
vehicles.From 2012 to 2016, Germany and French escalate gradually
between zero to 5
percents
of people. On the other hand, the percentage of people utilizing
electric
vehicles in Netherland increase
exponentially around 10 percents on
2016, while Norway shows sharply increase until nearly 40 percents
of people utilizing
electric
vehicles.Between 2018 and 2022, Germany and French
rising
progressively around 10 percents
until 15 percents
in 2022, at the same time Netherlands shows dramatically increase of
people percentage using
electric
vehicles. Furthermore, the people percentage using
electric
vehicles in Norway illustrates significantly increase
and become
the highest percentage over the period of the year. In conclusion, the percentage of people using
electric
vehicles in various European countries have
increased between 2012 and 2022.