IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5
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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The task achievement is limited due to inaccuracies in data interpretation and insufficient coverage of trends.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 12 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Describe the changes in the number of commuters using different modes of transport in New York City from 2010 to 2020.
Summarize the main trends for each mode of transport.
Compare the fluctuations among the different modes.
Identify any significant changes or anomalies over the period.
#Transportation
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:4
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The line graph
comprares
the population of people using four different types of transportation over a period of 10 years.It is clear that Subway was by far the most popular modes of
communting
over the period shown. Bicycle had the lowest number of commuters in each year.In 2010, Subway was the highest figure compared to others, using by 500,000 people, and remained the highest figure over the period shown. The figure for bus and car just under 100,000 and 200,000 respectively, and Bicycle provided a negligible amount.
Between 2018 and 2020, Subway, Car, and Bicycle are all
exprienced
a gradually increased and reached it peaked towards the end of the period, with 550,000, 500,000, and 290,000 people respectively. However, Bus was the only transportation that saw steady
decrease at the end, with 290,000 people.