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The response provides a basic overview of cultural participation trends but lacks detailed analysis and clarity. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Analyze the cultural participation trends for the regions of Europe, Asia, North America, and Oceania from 2005 to 2015.
Describe the trends for each region over the given period.
Highlight any regions with significant increases or decreases.
Compare the overall participation rates among the regions.
#Cultural Participation
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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The line graph compares about the cultural participation trends in four different continents over the period 10 years.
In 2005 , North American citizens were participated most and the Asian people celebrated
the lowest cultural
programmge
.Initially in
first
3 years , all region people contributed
in
culture
program which rate is Europe 57 percent, Asia is 43 percent, North America is 67 and Oceania is 52 percent.In 2008 Asian participation ratio dramatically decreased
almost
3 per cent.
Moreover , The figure for North America peaked almost 78 percent and Europe individual rose approximately 75 percent. The
oceania
citizens participation amont
fluctuated over the period and reached 64 percent.