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The response provides a basic overview of cultural participation trends but lacks detailed analysis and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more accurate data interpretation would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
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| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Analyze the cultural participation trends for the regions of Europe, Asia, North America, and Oceania from 2005 to 2015.
Describe the trends for each region over the given period.
Highlight any regions with significant increases or decreases.
Compare the overall participation rates among the regions.
#Cultural Participation
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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The line graph compares about the
cultural
participation trends in four different continents over the period 10 years.Overall it can be seen that the
citizen
of Europe participated most in cultural
programe
, on the other hand
the Aisan people cotributed
lowest
proportion in cultural
programe
.Initially in
first
3 years
the participation ratio increased gradually. In 2007
the individuals of Europe celebrated almost 54 percent , Asian citizen amount is 44 per cent , North America
rate is 63 percent and Oceania ratio is 53 percent. The next year in Asian people
participation proportion decreased dramatically approximately 2 percent.Moreover, The Europe and North America the
cultural
programe
participation ratio peaked a lot than others two countries in last 2 years. The participation amount in Oceania fluctuated over the period shown.