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5.5
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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in grammar and coherence. Vocabulary is adequate, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Transportation
#Line Chart
Describe the changes in the number of commuters using different modes of transport in New York City from 2010 to 2020.
Summarize the main trends for each mode of transport.
Compare the fluctuations among the different modes.
Identify any significant changes or anomalies over the period.
Submitted Answer
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The line graph below illustrates the changes in the amount of commuters using four types of transport - subway, bus, bicycle and car, in New York City between 2010 and 2020.
Overall, the most consumption was on subway all the given period, followed by car. While bicycle had
a
lowest number of commuters. All the figres
excluded the bus increased to the end of the period. The bus was less popular transport that commuter used in the given decade.The number of commuters using
car
steadly
increase
from 400000 in 2010 to 500 000 in 2020, the number of commuters by bicycle had same activity started with 50000 at the beginning of the period and ended with more than 100000 commuters.
The subway most utilized transport that
slighly
declined in 2016 before reached
a peak by
570000 commuters in 2020. The bus was static with 300000 commuters for few
years and marginally fell to 270000 commuters to
the end of the given period.