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The response provides a general overview of the crime rates but contains several grammatical errors and lacks precise data interpretation. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the logical flow needs improvement for better coherence.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 12 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
The line chart displays the crime rates in four different cities over a period of six years.
Summarize the overall trends in crime rates for each city.
Identify any significant fluctuations or changes.
Compare the crime rates among the four cities.
#Crime Rates
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Submitted Answer
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Words:174
Paragraphs:4
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The line chart
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crime rates in New York, Los Angeles, Chicago, and Houston over a six-year period form
2010 to 2015.Overall, crime rate in Chicago, Los Angeles and Houston experienced a gradual increase, while New York
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a more upward trend.In 2010, New York had a crime rate of around 500. This rate increased steadily over the period, reaching nearly 620 by 2015. Chicago's crime rate rose by about 20% in 2011, then dipped by 10% in 2012, before following an upward trend to reach close to 480 by 2015. Starting at approximately 450 in 2010, Los Angeles experienced a steady increase in crime rates, reaching just over 500by the end of the period. Houston began with a crime rate
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around 400 in 2010. While it remained relatively stable initially, it eventually rose to exceed 500 by 2015.In summary, New York consistently had the highest crime rate among the four cities. Each city saw a general upward trend, with New York and Houston experiencing more significant rises.