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The response provides a general overview of the trends in online retail sales but lacks precision in data interpretation and coherence. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range slightly hinder clarity and effectiveness.

Overall score	5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Retail and E-commerce

#Line Chart

Describe the trends in the Line Chart showing the percentage of online retail sales over a decade in four different countries.

Identify the overall trend for each country.

Compare and contrast the fluctuations between the countries.

Highlight any periods of significant change.

Submitted Answer

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The line chart provides information on the sales of online retail

in USA

, China, UK, and Germany in the span of 10 years.

Overall, all four countries have gone through a considerable change in the number of sales. China rose as the top country with the highest percentage of online sales, roaring since 2015 to 2019. On the other of the spectrum was Germany, which had a steady increase in the amount of sales compared to the rest of the countries.

In detail,

and China have reached the

same

number of sales which was 15% around 2014 to 2015, accompanied by the USA and Germany, who have managed to be on the

same

level around the

same

time. However, in 2015,

USA

experienced a dip

sales which later

begun

slowy

grew less than a year later. Despite a slight

drop

of sales,

USA

was still ahead of Germany by 2016 and has kept growing. Moreover, the race of sales between China and the UK from 2010 has reached

exactly the

same

point in 2012 (around 5%), which they later on split up with China

continously

leading the online sales.

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Total Errors	18
Grammatical range and accuracy	7
Lexical resource	6
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	2