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The response provides a basic overview of the crime rates but lacks clarity and precision in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
The line chart displays the crime rates in four different cities over a period of six years.
Summarize the overall trends in crime rates for each city.
Identify any significant fluctuations or changes.
Compare the crime rates among the four cities.
#Crime Rates
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:4
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The line chart illustrates the ratio of crime among
varities
town (New York, Los Angeles, Chicago, and Houston) from 2010 to 2015.Overall, New York city was accounted for highest number of crime whereas Chicago was in lowest
poisition
for crimes. Fluctuation ratio between Los Angeles and Houston are almost same.In the year 2010, number of crime was 500 in New York
and
it was rising continuously till
2012. On the otherhand
number of crime in Chicago was only 300
which was the lowest amount but
it increased in the following years. In Chicago crime was little bit decreased whereas in 2013 crime rates also controlled in New York which was just under 600.In the year of 2010,
number
of crimes was 400 and 450 in Los Angeles and Houston. The decrease and increase ratio was constant for this
two cities. In 2012
crimes was fallen but rest of the years crime rates was continuously increased.