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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and inaccuracies in data interpretation. Coherence and cohesion are affected by unclear sentence structures and lack of logical flow, while vocabulary usage is limited and repetitive.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
The line chart shows the percentage of households with access to high-speed internet in four regions from 2008 to 2018.
Describe the overall trends in high-speed internet access.
Compare the access levels between the regions.
Highlight any notable fluctuations or patterns.
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Submitted Answer
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The line chart illustrates the percentage of households with
gain
access to high-speed internet in North America, Europe, Asia and South America between 2008 to 2018
.Overall, the four continents internet steadily increased. North America leads the highest internet access, followed by Europe, and Asia. The least internet speed is South America.
North America started the period with approximately 70% of internet speed in 2008 and this continuously moved up
year on year
to reach a peak of 90% in 2018.South America began the recorded period with approximately 40% in
2008
which was the lowest internet speed among the other three continents until it reached a peak of 60% in 2018.
Europe was valued at 50% in 2008 and this jumped dramatically to 70% in 20018.
Similary
, Asia had 50% speed in 2008, second to the least internet access before South America and fell to the peak of 70% in the final year.