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The response provides a clear overview of population trends in the four cities, with accurate data references. However, the analysis could be more detailed, particularly in comparing the growth rates and providing specific figures for each city. The grammar is mostly accurate, with a good range of structures, but the vocabulary could be more varied.

Overall score	7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	8.0
Lexical resource	7.0
Coherence & cohesion	7.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Population Growth

#Line Chart

Examine the population growth data for Sydney, Beijing, Paris, and Mumbai between 1995 and 2015.

Describe the growth trend of each city.

Highlight any significant changes or fluctuations.

Compare the population growth trends among these cities.

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The line chart displays the population

increase of

cities, Sydney, Beijing, Paris, and Mumbai, from 1995 to 2015.

At a glimpse, we can see that Beijing and Mumbai remain as the two most populated cities since 1995 respectively, with both places continuing to show steady growth even after two decades. On the other hand, Paris and Sydney show no significant changes to their population from twenty years ago.

For the highly populated cities, Beijing and Mumbai, both observe an addition of nearly half a million individuals in their population every three years, therefore, attributing to their dramatic rise overtime. Although it can be evidenced that Mumbai shows a slightly faster growth in population in comparison to Beijing, it is not enough to surpass the country in terms of the number of its residents.

Meanwhile for Paris and Sydney, their populations have no major difference given that Sydney has just reached the four-million mark in 2015 and Paris has ten million.

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