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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends and comparisons. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
The line chart shows the percentage of total agricultural land used for crop cultivation in four African countries from 1995 to 2005.
Describe the general trends in the percentage of land used for crop cultivation.
Compare the rates of increase or decrease among the countries.
Highlight any periods of rapid change or stability.
#Agriculture
#Line Chart
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The kine chart depicts the percentage
for
crop cultivate of total agricultural land used in Africa countries, which including Nigeria, Kenya ,South Africa, and Egypt from 1995 to 2005. Nigeria was the highest land used in 1995, follwing
with Kenya, South Africa and the least was Egypt. For both
Nigeria and Egypt increased in constant trends throughout these periods. Kenya had the most instability since the beginning but during 1999 to 2001 the slope inclined stable then started to fluctuate again. South Africa
percentage increased along to Eqypt until 1998 the line had ascend changed and back on track again. In summary, the country with continue go up of agricultural land used were Nigeria and Eqypt, the most fluctuate was Kenya and south Africa
, in respect.