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The response provides a general overview of income trends but lacks detailed analysis of specific data points. Grammar is mostly accurate, though the variety of structures could be improved. Vocabulary is adequate but not varied.

Overall score	6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	7.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Income Levels

#Line Chart

Analyze the changes in income levels for four European countries between 2005 and 2015.

Highlight the overall trends for each country.

Identify periods of significant growth or decline.

Discuss the possible factors influencing these trends.

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The income levels between

, France, Italy, and Spain were measured from 2005 to 2015 and its trends can be viewed in the line chart provided.

At a glance, we can observe that France was able to succeed as the highest income-earner among the four nations despite dramatically declining after 2008. The country ultimately recovered in 2012 and has shown steady improvement since then. Meanwhile, Italy showed consistent growth every year before it began to decrease steadily in 2013 without seeing signs of recovery afterwards. The UK, however, was able to bounce back from its dramatic depreciation in 2008 by rapidly rising in 2010 to eventually surpass Italy. Spain observed a similar pattern in 2009, although maintaining its position as the weakest in income level.

From these facts, we can gather that these figures could be a result of the unstable socio-economic conditions in the European Union and the ongoing conflict with the United Kingdom. As the UK is projected to flourish from 2015 onwards, this comes at the expense of some European countries like

Italy

whose citizens are showing more signs of poverty year after year.

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