IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5
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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks detailed analysis and specific data points. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect clarity, and the vocabulary is limited, impacting the overall coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
The bar chart displays the annual revenue (in billions of USD) of five major e-commerce companies from 2016 to 2020.
Identify the overall trends in the annual revenue of each company.
Compare the performance of these companies over the given timeframe.
Discuss any significant changes or irregularities in the data.
#Retail and E-commerce
#Bar Chart
Submitted Answer
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Words:110
Paragraphs:4
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The illustration shows yearly income of 5 big e-commerce companies within around 5 years since 2016
Overall, the total amount of annual income of 5 major companies was dramatically and steadily increased throughout the period. Amount of Amazon's indicator was dominated around all of
this
companies.Companies number of yearly revenue were dramatically increased in each year, except
eBAY
and Walmart, which companies's
indicators were increased gradually. Leading places between companies were stable and were placed by Amazon, JD.com and Alibaba.JD.com and Alibaba reached 100 billion is USD only in 2020, when Amazon reached it and even was greater compared this companies in 2016