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The response provides a general overview of population trends but lacks detailed analysis and precise data references. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate but could benefit from more variety and accuracy.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Describe the population growth trends shown in the Line Chart for Toronto, Tokyo, New York, and London from 2000 to 2020.
Summarize the overall trend for each city.
Identify any periods of rapid change or decline.
Compare the growth rates among the cities.
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The illustration displays the tendencies in the increase in population of 4 cities: Toronto, Tokyo, New York, and London between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, the total number of residents in Toronto was much smaller compared to the other three cities. Besides, all cities experienced a steady annual rising, and Tokyo has the most throughout increase rate.
In 2000, Toronto initially only had just over 2.
6 millions of
citizens, which is smaller than other countries approximately 3 times. This figure witnessed a slight growth annually, and reach its peak of around 3.3 million in 2020.On the other hand, New York and London, has their population at nearly 7 million, while Tokyo had 8 million individuals in 2000. While both New York and London shared nearly a same increasing pace, with the increase about 500000 people, Tokyo's population soared to reach
to
peak of around 9 million in 2020.