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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in describing trends and specific data points. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range affect clarity and coherence, while the task achievement is hindered by insufficient detail and analysis.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Water Usage
#Line Chart
Describe the changes in domestic water usage in four cities over a ten-year period.
Summarize the overall trend for each city.
Identify and explain any significant fluctuations or patterns.
Compare the water usage trends between the cities.
Submitted Answer
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The graphs illustrate the changes in the domestic water consumption in four cities, including New York, Los Angeles, Chicago and Houston, over a ten-year period. Overall, there was an increase in domestic water usage in every city by the end of the period. The highest domestic water consumption throughout the period was in New York, Los Angeles, Chicago and Houston, respectively.
New York consumed water of 300 units in 2010, and it fluctuated during the period of time, which it
rised
water consumption to approximately 380 units in 2019. Los Angeles, on the other hand, had steadily growth its water usage over the period of time. It used 200 units of water in 2010 and by the end of period
, it increased to around 290 units in 2019.Chicago and Houston share similar trend, which the water consumption slightly increase though out the period, except in the year 2013, that there was increase in the water usage in Chicago, but there was a decrease in Houston.