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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends and figures. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary affect coherence and task achievement, while the analysis of data trends is not fully accurate.

Overall score	5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Transportation

#Bar Chart

The bar chart presents the annual number of public transport trips (in millions) made in Berlin, Madrid, Rome, and Amsterdam from 2015 to 2020.

Highlight the key trends over the period.

Compare the changes in each city.

Discuss any significant rises or falls in the data.

Submitted Answer

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The graph shows how much of

pupulation

Europe

specifically in Berlin, Madrid, Rome and

Amsterdam

uses

Public Transport

everyyear

from 2015 to 2020

Overall in the

chart

the number of trips

are

made is slightly increases in almost every city through the years

and

it falls down around year 2020. Bringing out an example

for

this trend could be seen in the Berlin's

number however,

in Amsterdam the number has lesser changes over time.

First of all, In Berlin at year 2015 the data illustrates that 200million people are taking its trips

and

it increases for around 25million then this slight changes over time

suddently

decreases on year 2020 from 225million to 175million with its difference of 50million which is twice the drop of its rise over the year.

Moreover

this similar trend can be observed in different

city

taking

an example of Madrid, it has

raise

from 175million to

200million

then dropped backed to little less that 175million.

While the chart over time demonstrates its similarity in most of the

city

, Amsterdam

on the other hand

does show the changes

but

its changes are less appealing than others and its difference of high and low are kept under 40million people.

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