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The response provides a general overview of the crime rates but contains several inaccuracies in data interpretation and lacks clarity in some parts. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with some errors affecting readability and coherence.

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Writing Task

#Crime Rates

#Line Chart

The line chart displays the crime rates in four different cities over a period of six years.

Summarize the overall trends in crime rates for each city.

Identify any significant fluctuations or changes.

Compare the crime rates among the four cities.

Submitted Answer

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The graph depicts the ratio of criminal activities in several states

of USA

- New York, Los Angeles, Chicago, Houston - from 2010 to 2015.

Overall, it can be observed that crime rates increased throughout six years. New York had the highest criminal rate in all years,

whilist

Chicago had the least. Moreover, it is notable that all the cities crime rate surged in almost every year.

In details, New york had 500 cases in 2010 , elevated

upto

600 in 2012, dipped down a little bit in 2013 and peaked at around 620 in 2015. Los Angeles started from 450 in beginning year, had a slight decreased in 2012 by about 410 before increasing

upto

just above 500 in 2015. Similarly, Houston began by approximately 400 in 2010, fluctuated in same ratio

till

2013 and the figure climbed up afterward reaching about 450 in 2015.

On the other hand , Houston accounted for much lesser number as only 300 cases of crime was registered in 2010, experienced ups and down

till

2013

but

it was raised by 50 more and made it to 350 in 2015. However, it was the city that had very less criminal activities.

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