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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in data interpretation and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and more accurate data referencing would enhance the overall quality of the answer.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Housing
#Bar Chart
The bar chart shows the number of new housing units constructed annually in four European countries from 2015 to 2020.
Identify the general construction trends in each country.
Compare the number of new housing units among the countries.
Discuss any notable fluctuations or trends in the data.
Submitted Answer
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The graph demonstrates
population
of new
houses built every year in selected countries in europe
for six years between 2015 and 2022. In general, the trend of new
housing units went up in Germany, France, Italy, and Spain from 2015 to 2022. The trend was continued every years
and no down trend
in the graph.In details, the
biggest number
of new
houses was in Germany, while the smallest was in spain
. In 2015, Germany had around 200.000 new
houses, yet Spain just had under 100.000 new
properties. In the same year, Italy and France had around 100.000 and 150.000 properties for each countries
. After five years, all countries had significantly new
houses compared in
2015. Italy was added around 50.000 houses. It was followed by other countries, such as France, Italy, and Spain. Although Spain had increased houses, yet the number of new
properties was same in under 100.000 houses. The France had over 150.000 units, while italy
had over 100.000 units.