IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 5
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The response provides a basic overview of the data but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in some parts. The task achievement is limited due to inaccuracies in data representation and insufficient coverage of trends.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 22 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
The bar chart presents data on the percentage of people with tertiary education in various European countries in 2020.
Summarize the data by selecting and reporting the main features.
Make comparisons where relevant.
Highlight any significant trends or irregularities.
#Education Levels
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Submitted Answer
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The graph below shows the differences between different Euoropean countries and their percentage of population with Tertiary Education during the year 2020, the countries are Germany, France,United Kingdom,Italy and Spain.
First of
all
we can notice that the highest position is
manteined
by the United Kingdom with a peak of about 43% , while right after at the second position we can find Spain with
an
percentage of about 37%
that
like the
UK
had a very steady increase.
Secondly also the France had an important percentage, but not so high to be like the
others countries
. France
obtain
the third position with an
percentage of 34%. Below the France we have Germany with an
percentage of about 27% and at the lower position we have Italy with the lowest percentage of about 25% that is so many different by the others.In
summary
I have to say that UK are surely at the top with the highest percentage but not so difficult to reach in the next years. Unfortunately
Italy is at the bottom with a very lower percentage
so hard
to reach.