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The response provides a basic overview of CO2 emissions trends but lacks clarity and precision in data interpretation. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 24 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Climate Change
#Table
Analyze the changes in CO2 emissions (in million metric tons) from 2010 to 2020 for selected countries.
Highlight the overall trends in CO2 emissions for each country.
Identify any countries with significant increases or decreases in emissions.
Discuss potential factors influencing the changes in emissions for the countries listed.
| Country | 2010 | 2012 | 2014 | 2016 | 2020 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| USA | 5500 | 5400 | 5300 | 5100 | 5000 |
| China | 8000 | 8200 | 8500 | 8700 | 8900 |
| Germany | 900 | 880 | 860 | 840 | 820 |
| India | 2000 | 2100 | 2300 | 2500 | 2700 |
| Brazil | 500 | 520 | 540 | 560 | 580 |
Submitted Answer
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The given table illustrates the changes the
occured
in Co2 emissions across various countries starting from the year 2010 and till
the year 2020. The mertic
calaulation
that has been used in this table is mertic
tons. Overall
we can witness that changes reamined
mariginally
whether the change is upward or downward respectivetly
.The
begin
with
China had the most CO2 emmisions
overall
followed up by the USA Then India. But we can see an upward trend in China as during 2010 it was 8000 Metric Tons Compared with 8900 Metric Tons as of 2020. But USA Followed a gradual decrease in the numbers.Coming to Germany and Brazil, these countries have less than 1000
mertic
tons of emissions across the given time frame. Gemany
followed an
modest downward trend as the emissions fell gradually from 2010 to 2020. But it was opposite
in the case for Brazil as we could see a slight upward trend.