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The response provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in describing trends and figures. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect readability, and the vocabulary is limited, impacting the overall coherence and task achievement.

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Writing Task

#Tourism

#Table

The table below shows the expenditure on tourism advertising (in million USD) by five different countries from 2015 to 2020.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Make comparisons where relevant.

Year	UK	South Africa	Brazil	South Korea	Turkey
2015	500	150	200	250	300
2016	520	160	220	270	320
2017	540	170	240	290	340
2018	560	180	260	310	360
2019	580	190	280	330	380
2020	300	100	150	170	200

Submitted Answer

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The given

table demonstrate

information regarding the spending of promotional activity for tourism in five countries, namely, UK, South Africa Brazil, South Korea, and Turkey between 2015 and 2020.

Overall,

is the leading

in the in

expenses throughout the year

followed by,

Turkey. While South Africa, Brazil, South Korea, plummeted in the year 2020.

To begin with, UK, demonstrate the leading in the expenditure between the year 2015 and 2020 and reached the pinnacle of 300 Million USD at the end of the year.

Whreas

, Turkey, shows

continous

rise from 2015 to 2020 and reached a peak of 200 in the final year. On the other hand, South Africa, Brazil, South Korea, showed an increased until 2019 with 190, 280, 330 respectively. However, in the year 2020 South Africa, Brazil, South Korea, dropped

siginificantly

to 100, 150, 170 respectively. It can be seen that

is the highest in the cost for advertising based on the given data.

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Lexical resource	4
Coherence & cohesion	3
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