IELTS Writing Academic Checker - Sample Band 6
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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks clarity and precision in some areas. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect readability, and the logical flow could be improved for better coherence.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
| City | Apartment | Detached House | Townhouse | Studio |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| New York | 3000 | 4500 | 3500 | 2500 |
| San Francisco | 3500 | 5000 | 4000 | 3000 |
| Chicago | 2000 | 3500 | 2500 | 1500 |
| Miami | 2500 | 4000 | 3000 | 2000 |
| Seattle | 2700 | 4200 | 3200 | 2200 |
The table below depicts the average rent prices (in USD) for different types of housing in five cities in 2020.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Compare the average rent prices for the different types of housing.
Highlight any significant differences between the cities.
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Submitted Answer
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The given table compares the revenue of renting various housings in five different cities in 2020. The detached house recorded the highest rent among other housing
types
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York being the maximum while the minimum was in Chicago. However, the cheapest housing type was the studio , in which it was the most, and the least in San Francisco (3000), and Chicago (1500), respectively. For apartments
, the most expensive rent price was in San Francisco (3500), followed by New York (3000), then Seattle (2700) and Miami (2500). The cheapest appartement
was in Chicago with an average rent price of 2000. Comparing the town house, the highest rent price was recorded in San Francisco (4000) while the lowest was in Chicago(2500).