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The response provides a basic comparison of physical activities in New York and London but lacks clarity and detail in some areas. Improvements in grammatical accuracy and a more structured approach to data presentation would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
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| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
London
New York
Analyze the pie charts showing the distribution of various physical activities among adults in New York and London, expressed in percentages.
Compare the proportions of different physical activities between the two cities.
Identify any significant differences in the data.
Discuss possible reasons for these differences.
#Health and Fitness
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
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The given pie charts
compares
the proportion of adults contribution in physical excercises
(Running,Swimming, Gym workouts and Yoga) in New York and London. The unit
are measured in percentages.Overall, it is clear that Gym had the highest rate in New York, followed by Running as the second most popular, while Gym maintained the top level as the most common
excersie
In London and Cycling stood in the second place.
additionally
, Swimming and Yoga were the least popular among adults.In London, Gym workouts saw a notable rate at 30% of the total exercise. In addition, Running were 5% lesser.Moreover,