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The response provides a general overview of the data but lacks precision in describing trends and changes. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary range affect clarity and coherence, while the task achievement is hindered by insufficient detail and analysis.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
2010
2020
The pie charts below show the percentage distribution of international tourists visiting five different countries in 2010 and 2020.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Compare the changes in the distribution of tourists over the two years.
Identify any significant trends or irregularities.
#Tourism
#Pie Chart
Submitted Answer
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The given pie chart depicts the percentage of tourist flow in five several countries
like USA
, China, Italy in year 2010 and 2020. The proportion of visitors visiting USA
is the highest among all as it was 30% in year 2010 however,
it decreased by 5% after a decade. France covers 20% of tourist flow in 2010 with similar to the Spain, but France had a growth after 10 years by 5% whereas spain
suffered from reduction upto
same percentage. People's exploring the China was 15% in 2010
but it rised
up to 20% in year
2020. Italy welcomed the same percentage of guests in both years
which was 15% remaining the constant among all. In overview
by examining the data of both years, we can conclude that USA was the most visited country in both years while Italy was least visited aming
those five countries.