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The response provides a basic overview of population trends but contains several grammatical errors and lacks clarity in data interpretation. Improved coherence and more precise vocabulary would enhance the overall quality of the answer.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 12 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Examine the population growth trends in four different regions of Australia over the past 20 years.
Describe the overall population growth for each region.
Highlight periods of rapid growth or decline.
Compare the growth patterns among the regions.
#Population Growth
#Line Chart
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:2
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The given line graphs depict the amount of population growth in four different regions of Australia, including New South Wales, Victoria, Queensland, and Western Australia, from the 2000s to 2020. The highest growth was in New South Wales in the final year, and the lowest was the same area in the first period given. Overall, the trends of these Australia's regions increased throughout the entire time.
As presented in the Western Australia graph, the amount started at 2000 in the first year, which was the lowest population in the graph. Western Australia experienced a gradual rise until the early 2010, with
wastern
austrailian
's growth growing to around 2300. Then moderately increase to 2500 in ten years later. Similarly, a closer inspection of the trends illustrates that the rest regions, which are Queensland, Victoria, and New South Wales, slightly went up by a tiny portion each year. Moreover, the number of population started at 4000, 5000, and 6000, respectively. With some rise, the number of
Queensland and victoria
reached 4000 and 5000 in 2020, and in New South Wales totalled at exactly 6500 in the last period.